A weblog for Pete Ellertsen's mass communications students at Benedictine University Springfield.

Sunday, September 26, 2010

COMM 337: New York Times recalls a classic baseball story. Baseball? No, a classic story in every way ... AND A WRITING ASSIGNMENT FOR YOUR BLOGS

In today's New York Times, Charles McGrath recalled John Updike's story on Red Sox baseball legend Ted Williams' last game at Fenway Park in Boston. Updike's headline "Hub Fans Bid Kid Adieu" made fun of generations of sportwriting cliches, but the story is a classic of well-written magazine journalism. It is archived here on The New Yorker's website.

[It's timely now because Tuesday is the 50th anniversary of Williams' last game, on Sept. 28, 1960.]

Here's the assignment. It comes in three steps:
1. Read Donald Murray, especially Chapters 3-4, on "reporting for surprise" and finding the flow (Murray calls it "tension" of a story. As you read Murray, try to figure out what he means by "surprise." It's almost impossible to explain, but it's important. It may be the single most important thing that makes your work stand out in the crowd.

2. Read "Hub Fans Bid Kid Adieu." How does Updike develop the tension of the story? Are there any surprises in it as you read? What other techniques and/or attitudes that Don Murray suggests do you find reflected in Updike's story?

3. Post your thoughts (about 1,000 words) to your blog, and email me when you've finished. If you can't complete it by the end of the week, email me anyway and let me know how you're doing on it.
>As always, if you have questions, comments or suggestions, please don't hesitate to get back to me.

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Springfield (Ill.), United States
I'm a retired English, journalism and cultural studies teacher at Springfield College in Illinois (acquired by Benedictine University and subsequently closed). I coordinate jam sessions for the "Clayville Pioneer Academy of Music" at Clayville Historic Site and the Prairieland Strings dulcimer club, and I sing in the choir and the contemporary praise team at Peace Lutheran Church in Springfield. On Hogfiddle I post links and video clips for our sessions and workshops on the mountain dulcimer (a.k.a. "hog fiddle"), as well as research notes on folklore and cultural studies, hymnody and traditional Anglo-Celtic and Scandinavian music. I also posted assignments and readings in my interdisciplinary humanities classes. The Mackerel Wrapper (now on hiatus), carried assignments and readings for my mass comm. students. I started teaching b/log when I chaired SCI-Benedictine's assessment committee, and reopened it as the privatization of public schools grew increasingly troubling and closer to home.